Hi, Lydia! I am very intrigued by these images! They all have unique perspectives and powerful compositions, and I appreciate the range in subject matter. I do think that some, especially the first two images, seem a bit too dark. I think that has to do with the aperture. I was most drawn to the third image. It gives the clear impression of a pattern, but leaves a lot to the imagination, and moves my eye through the image quite well. Overall, I think these images really work well!
4th image: Good vertical movements. The colors move my eye from light to dark. You might also try orientating the linear elements in different relationships to the edges. What is these lines moved at a diagonal? The right top edge could be sharper.
Please, avoid photographing artwork. Use high apertures - on some of your images the background is out of focus.
Hi, Lydia! I am very intrigued by these images! They all have unique perspectives and powerful compositions, and I appreciate the range in subject matter. I do think that some, especially the first two images, seem a bit too dark. I think that has to do with the aperture. I was most drawn to the third image. It gives the clear impression of a pattern, but leaves a lot to the imagination, and moves my eye through the image quite well. Overall, I think these images really work well!
ReplyDelete4th image: Good vertical movements. The colors move my eye from light to dark. You might also try orientating the linear elements in different relationships to the edges. What is these lines moved at a diagonal? The right top edge could be sharper.
ReplyDeletePlease, avoid photographing artwork.
Use high apertures - on some of your images the background is out of focus.